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"Poem; death of a seer" by Amanda Rosberg Olsson

SF&F Picture 9 out of 10 by Amanda Rosberg Olsson

I Never write poems, but here is a very rare exeption.

Poem; death of a seer

There is nothing,
nothing,
for me to do.
there is nothing,
left.
I am the only,
survivor.
There is no one,
left,
but me.
They are not dead,
They just can't,
see.
I am the only,
one that,
sees.
This is my final,
step.
I won't walk,
anymore.
I don't know,
what will,
happen.
But I,
embrace it,
if it means,
that,
I won't have to,
see,
anymore.
This is the,
death,
of the final,
seer.

←- Salvation Lets Their Wings Unfold | Storms Forming -→

Date	Name	Comment
2 Apr 2004	Chipmunk	Loading... I can't believe no one has commented yet, this is a great poem ^_^ Amanda Rosberg Olsson replies: "Thanks! That so nice of you to comment, I'm glad you liked it"
26 May 2004	Vanessa Girouard	Loading... I love the short lines and repetition, but you should enhance the vocabulary used (unless it is on purpose, if that is the case, I am an idiot), because it would definitively make your poem stronger. Amanda Rosberg Olsson replies: "Thanx for commenting! I'm glad you like it =)"
16 Dec 2004	Annye K. Driscoll	Loading... Wow wow wow great job Amanda Rosberg Olsson replies: "Thanks! and thank you for comenting!"
16 Dec 2004	Larry N. Morris	Loading... So, the Writer of the Day doesn't write poetry. Hmmm...she does it well, though. LOL I Don't write poetry either, I'm a novelist, but I have two posted. Stop by and take a look sometime. Amanda Rosberg Olsson replies: "I'm glad you liked it! It's really not my usual style but everyone get an itch now and then..."
7 Jun 2005	Elin Ål	Loading... Lille Amanda... så du skriver alltså inte poesi? Ge denna till Malin så får hon spader. Du är bäst. Hoppas allt gick bra på matten. Puss puss påse

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About 'Poem; death of a seer':

• Status: OK
• Created by:

Amanda Rosberg Olsson
• Copyright: ©Amanda Rosberg Olsson. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Loneliness, Seer, Death
• Categories: Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love, Celtic
• Views: 318

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