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Amanda Rosberg Olsson

"Poem" by Amanda Rosberg Olsson

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Yeah, I know I've said that I never write poems, so sue me! ^.^
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The girl is quiet,
tears down her face.
Walking all alone
through the crowded forrest.

Everything is quiet, none say a thing
as her tears splash against the wooden roots.
Everybody's looking but no one sees
the sorrow about her figure.

The fair of elven race, the smile is always ready.
Face is turned away, eyes masked by untrue jest.
Nobody cares about tears cried in somber silence.
Why must she be so alone?

Caught in lonely agony,
her mind to dark to notice.
The world around her change
to ease her tortured spirit.

She will not see how the trees
stretch down to caress her lovely face.
The grass is always greener wherever she lies down
and flowers sprout where she touches.

The rain drops fall only to
take her tears away.
Why must she walk in silence, when
speaking would make her loved?

Following in her steps, they only escort her,
unseen creatures tries with all their might
to lift the veil of apathy.
Around her flutters every kind of fey.

What makes them love her so, and truly to no avail,
must ever stay unknown, no reason to give way.
The game they play is most unfair, the girl is to far gone,
to ever hear, or join in their joyful song.

←- Confession | Salvation Lets Their Wings Unfold -→

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1 Jun 2005:-) Douglas Eckhart
I saw your name on the 'recent additions' list so I read this poem. It's much better than any poem I could ever write! Lots of imagery, very lonely though. Now I'll have to go read something happy to change my mood. 12 But... but.. what's with the title?! "Poem" No wonder the elf girl is so depressed, she's trapped in poem land when she wanted to be in "swarmed in loneliness by creatures of happiness" land! Well, okay, that would probably get cut off if you tried to use it as a title... ah well, nevermind me! I just thought I'd let you know that people are actually reading your stuff. Keep writing! ^_^

:-) Amanda Rosberg Olsson replies: "Thanks! As a fellow writer, you must know how great it feels to hear that =) I always say that if there's one thing I'm worse at than poetry; it's titles ^.^, Thanks again for your comment!"
16 Jun 2005:-) Johanna Meven
Wow, great poem. After reading it I felt really - ehm - depressed in a way. But still great.
24 Sep 2005:-) Larry N. Morris
Very good poem. You don't write poems? Neither do I, but I have some posted too, hee, hee.
27 Nov 2007:-) Owen Ginger Hickman
Lovely, truly lovely.
21 Nov 2008:-) Michael pixie john
sad girl in a forest walking ..
very well described
sadness comes to everyone sometimes
love how you described the fey all around her
when she awakens from this sorrow she will see them again
and be much stronger
and feel the deepest joy
thats the journey of sorrows i believe
~ lovely poem , very moving


:-) Amanda Rosberg Olsson replies: "Thanks for commenting! I’m quite overwhelmed with the reception of this one poem I never thought was anything special. Sadly the poetry I write is mostly NG so I won’t put it up 2 "
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About 'Poem':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Amanda Rosberg Olsson
 • Copyright: ©Amanda Rosberg Olsson. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Elf, Sadness, Alone, Druidry
 • Categories: Elf / Elves, Faery, Fay, Faeries, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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